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Super Pochaco 01

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The uncensored version in my Patreon

Commissions for :iconjpop52: jpop52
Lineart & Color by :iconale-mangekyo: ale-mangekyo

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Hi there! Well first off, you have a magnificent eye for color. There's a nice amount of variation of pink, peach, and some orange and purple so that the color is nice and vibrant!

Now, I notice that the body looks a bit mismatched. That's not to say the individual parts of the body are proportionally incorrect, its more like they were drawn separately from each other and then put together? For example, if the arm under the breasts were removed her torso would look very long and her head looks much too small for the height of her body.

Not to worry though! I can tell that there's been a lot of hours of practice here and I simply reccomend stepping back and double checking every once in a while to see if the composition makes sense. Its a mistake I made a LOT, and still continue to make to this day. Just don't get lost in tiny details and work with loose, basic shapes at first! Details come last!

Continue to practice and challenge yourself with some one minute life drawing drills! It does WONDERS for your art! You have FANTASTIC potential!